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Monday, March 7, 2011

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The 3 Idiots

This is the one that I already fixed using my check list.

The three of them were drunk in the middle of the night as they walking into the university hall.
Raju "Hey do you know that i was so happy when i annoyed that old manat the door"
Rancho "What the hell are you doing that for?"
Farhan"But that old mans face looks so funny"
They are walking half dead going to their rooms. They were so sleepy that they went into the classroom without realizing it. Somehow when the class started that morning none sat in the back row, where the three of them had fallen asleep. The time they woke up, they were looked like idiot, and Chatur found a bottle of rum"
Chatur "Hey Mr. Lecture look what I found! it's a bottle of rum"
Lecture "Farhan go to my room now!"
Lecture was so angry. Farhan was brought to the principle's office and Mr. Lecture asked him to write a letter to his parent's. The letter saying that he was dismissed from school and the only way to save himself was to choose between himself and his best frieds Rancho. The friends that save his father life. THis was a matter of life and death fo Farhan.
Farhan "But MR."
Lecture :It's your choice not mine, you are the one who made the mistake"
He was so depressed, then the clock ring, it was time for Lecture shave his mustache while listened to classical music, Farhan decide to jump from the third floor.  and he jumped, Lecture noticed because the lamp beside him also fell down. Lecture panicked and can't say anything and Rancho was so angry. Farhan lay in a critical condition for a mont and can;t do anything. The doctor said that the only way to make him recover was by making him happy. Farhan's family and his friends tried to make sure his sister was married to Raju and it's actually working. He started to open his eyes, and the time he woke up was the day of interview for his job, it was was also the day that Raju got the jon as assistant to the professional photographer that he idolized. Raju went straight back to school. Farhan tell everything honestly about himself. He said why he was injured and all about his abilities. that he doesn't suit that compony,but the person who interviewed him liked him. He stared talking about the salary and everything. He was so happy that he could n't speak at all. he come out with a sad face to make Rancho feel sorry for him and then he told them that he got a job,. Do they all got jobs and he win the bet , the Lecture shave his mustache and he said that to the barber to shave his mustache. HE was really angry and said himself the he would make the final exam